Herman Hiddema
Dated: October 14, 1996
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I made this ascii of a hawk carrying a spear for my new handle, SPARHAWK
can anyone make any suggestions on how to improve on this? I don't
really like the tail of the hawk yet, nor do I like the point of the
spear.
Any help appreciated, thx.
Herman Hiddema http://huizen.dds.nl/~shimrod <csg824@wing.rug.nl>
by884@freenet.toronto.on.ca (llizard)
followed with:
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And I incorporated your "SPARHAWK" into the spear. Here are two versions of
the spear.
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And what about turning the bird around? Then it's easier to read the
"SPARHAWK".
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Hope it helps. The tail looks okay to me.